Welcome Readers!
It feels great pleasure to share my first attempt to write a Metaphysical poem with you all. In this poem titled ‘The Match’, I have tried to signify a young girl’s feelings who is at the verge of death, with a match stick.
Hope to receive critical comments from you!
Thank you.
It feels great pleasure to share my first attempt to write a Metaphysical poem with you all. In this poem titled ‘The Match’, I have tried to signify a young girl’s feelings who is at the verge of death, with a match stick.
The Match
Howbeit a Match
When envisaged-
The room full of drama,
-wafting from the world,
She drove to possibility of life
To survive as a ‘petal’ on ‘thrones’.
Broke her magical phantasm
-the fierce truth of dark;
Murdered her charm.
Yet deep down unto her
Prevailed the sparkle of affection,
Too real for the world-
Which already engulfed in chaos.
To split herself apart,
She used ecstasies,
Focused on aspirations.
She then actualized-
Was doomed to be burned
To illuminate the chamber
And the reader found a light.
None but her mate;
In thirst of more light
Stroked with frictional force,
And the mild, thoughtful, treasured her
In relief and wonder
She sacrificed herself-
To quiet the tempest!
- Kavisha Alagiya
Hope to receive critical comments from you!
Thank you.
Great! This poem reminded me "The Flea" By John Donne. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you! It was a wonderful experience in trying to write Metaphysical poetry.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
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